poetry, six sentence story

The Operation

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She found the most plump, well-rounded, orangest subject

As she studied the lines between the prominent ridges

She looked for just the right place to make an incision

Careful not to lose focus and distort her vision for perfection

She drew perfect marks for the removal of the cap

As the pumpkin sat still on the firmest of structure


This is my Six Sentence Story for this week. It will be linked to the reader board later this week. Thanks to Girlie on the Edge for the keyword STRUCTURE

4 thoughts on “The Operation”

  1. (Hey! Frank, I don’t disagree but this Six scene is two personal pronouns away from total horror.”)
    oh, hey I’m sorry got caught with an alternate imagining of your most descriptive of scene settings!
    fun Six

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