Shifting Sands
dusty breezes pull
my eyes into closed peeking
trying to figure
how to shield and see
when shifting sands
pull me into the sea
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This is my installation for this week’s Six Sentence Story– Click on <<< — that link to check out the links.
I like the description of the problem of seeing through the sandy breeze while shielding one’s eyes from the sand.
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What Frank said! Nice 6!
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Lisa if a picture is worth a thousand words, your words painted a clear picture. Great six
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Beautifully told.
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I was right there, shading my squinting eyes and following you into the cooling sea!
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No, thank YOU! (Smiles and splashes in the water)
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It’s a lovely six
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Super Six, Lisa! I can feel that sand shifting…
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I absolutely LOVE this, Lisa π Beautiful.
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Huge message in few words, Lisa. Super ‘little’ six.
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This was very nice. I was wondering if we can both shield and see before nature decides for us.
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