Pawned

14 thoughts on “Pawned”

1. I like the ending word “tears” which wouldn’t have affected the gold band.

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2. The last 2 lines are poignant. “it is in fine condition
   regardless of the tears”

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3. A sad poem, but lovely to read.

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   1. Thank you! I keep meaning to tell you that I received your book. Thank you so much.

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      1. You’re welcome, Lisa. I hope you like it.

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4. Tender and sad. The last line is powerful.

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   1. Thank you!

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5. Almost nothing damages gold, unlike hearts.

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   1. Amen!

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6. Sounds as if this was the closure she needed “regardless of the tears”.

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   1. Thanks, I think so.

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7. So much emotion in those few words!

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8. call me weird, but my mind read the final line as both ‘tears’ and ‘tears'(tares)
   nice

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   1. Thank you!

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